I would like to extend my thanks for these scripts. I've been using them a lot lately, and have found that they've worked wonders in areas where reading guides, consulting others, and "just believing" have mostly failed me for nearly a damn year now. I'm still not quite where I'd like to be, but with some repetition and continued work, I'm sure this method will get me there soon enough.
I had to "raise the stakes" in the leash/footrace script at the chasm by replacing the soft surface with jagged, brutal rocks just to put a little more emphasis on the importance of the leap, but otherwise just the stock, unedited scripts in your guide have worked perfectly for me.
If I were Roger Ebert, and I were still alive, I would give this two thumbs up.