A story about me and my tulpa

[Lumanatrix]

My character is Ember. I had wrote this a while ago and decided to make Ray into a tulpa, but I got writer's block and didn't finish it. Ray helped me come up with new ideas so I redid the entire story. There may be holes or places where it doesn't make sense, because I quickly did a lot of editing on the early chapters to make it make sense in the later ones. It's not exactly finished, and I'm open to ideas for how to improve.

 

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nZYwhykuhhQqVgEzV8rHP8uULxEfXAiQoXSyDUyfC9o/edit?usp=sharing

[Lumanatrix]

Bump, and I also made a voice recording of the story https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wjx4S6EUYMo&t=122s