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Muaha, I made a fanfiction with my tulpa in it


Akiake

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I feel like this is a bad thing for an individual to do... then again, I dunno the circumstances. 'Scuse me for my paranoia, but your tulpa was like... made, before you started this whole fanfiction business, right? Just gotta ask because reasons.

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Your author's note makes your genuinely good work look unprofessional, I'd suggest changing it.

 

Tide: Oh, and, never use numerals, always spell out numbers completely—unless specifically called for. Also, be selective with your capitals, bolding, italics and ellipses; you've actually kept your story quite clean from the perspective, maybe apart from the capitals. This is also true with explanation points and question marks, but things such as ''HAPPENING???!!'' Is just plain silly, keep it to one of each mark, and you'll be in the clear.

 

Once again, I actually really like it, just some room for polishing.

Pruria Joal (Pegasus)

Working on: Imposition

Hieldy (Moogle)

Working on: Possession/imposition

Samantha (Griffon)

Working on: Deafness/form

 

And please, call me G.

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