Akiake May 18, 2013 Share May 18, 2013 My tulpa is Skyfire and I decided to write a fanfic with her in it enjoy http://www.fimfiction.net/story/104459/avenging-my-father[/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
glitchthe3rd May 18, 2013 Share May 18, 2013 Moved to Tulpa Art. "Science isn't about why, science is about why not?" -Cave Johnson Tulpae: Luna, Elise, Naomi My progress report Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akiake May 19, 2013 Author Share May 19, 2013 Thanks, wasn't really sure where to post it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Anonymous May 19, 2013 Share May 19, 2013 I feel like this is a bad thing for an individual to do... then again, I dunno the circumstances. 'Scuse me for my paranoia, but your tulpa was like... made, before you started this whole fanfiction business, right? Just gotta ask because reasons. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G+3 May 19, 2013 Share May 19, 2013 Your author's note makes your genuinely good work look unprofessional, I'd suggest changing it. Tide: Oh, and, never use numerals, always spell out numbers completely—unless specifically called for. Also, be selective with your capitals, bolding, italics and ellipses; you've actually kept your story quite clean from the perspective, maybe apart from the capitals. This is also true with explanation points and question marks, but things such as ''HAPPENING???!!'' Is just plain silly, keep it to one of each mark, and you'll be in the clear. Once again, I actually really like it, just some room for polishing. Pruria Joal (Pegasus) Working on: Imposition Hieldy (Moogle) Working on: Possession/imposition Samantha (Griffon) Working on: Deafness/form And please, call me G. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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