Tulpae Essay

[glitchthe3rd]

Yes, it would be better if you saved the technical jargon for later. Any good expository piece features basic information for the first half to three-quarters of the length, and the final portion is reserved for technical aspects.

 

I'd also like to express a preference for the term mindscape instead of wonderland, because it sounds more scientific.

[Lacquer]

To keep with that train of thought, "tulpaforcing" sounds a little childish.

[Nobillis]

And no it's not a psychology essay, it is actually an english essay.

 

If it is an English essay, then Sands comments on grammar are more relevant. When I was studying English, what I got from the course was -

 

"Don't break the language until you know what you are doing - then really break it hard (but use correct punctuation so it's harder for people to complain)."

 

- Of course, this little missive I've written isn't English, it's colloquial verbalization (also known as "speech").

 

Insincerely yours,

Kerin, B.A. (English)

(Please, don't take me too seriously)