terex September 20, 2012 September 20, 2012 Be prepared for some below middle school-tier crap... Sit down and prepare to take your fix and all other things seem to lose meaning to this as if your ensnared against a clock counting down to your end while it ticks. In this world there is but one other who dons the familiarity of a brother but who looks to you like a child to her mother and her first words shake your world, a torrent of thunder. Cut her free from these binds those which are forged in our minds, waiting til you feel the first sign and following examples of the divine you spawn her to this earthen plane focusing all attention, shutting out the pain relentless until she looks the same and remember in the end... you're still sane. I am so sorry for creating this.
Josh September 20, 2012 September 20, 2012 Be prepared for some below middle school-tier crap... Sit down and prepare to take your fix and all other things seem to lose meaning to this as if your ensnared against a clock counting down to your end while it ticks. In this world there is but one other who dons the familiarity of a brother but who looks to you like a child to her mother and her first words shake your world, a torrent of thunder. Cut her free from these binds those which are forged in our minds, waiting til you feel the first sign and following examples of the divine you spawn her to this earthen plane focusing all attention, shutting out the pain relentless until she looks the same and remember in the end... you're still sane. I am so sorry for creating this. "Why? It was nice!" admittedly, i imagined a stereotypical rapper singing it.
terex September 20, 2012 September 20, 2012 admittedly, i imagined a stereotypical rapper singing it. Yeah I'm no poet nor am I a rapper but. Hip hop is about all I listen too so I knew that would influence it but tried to keep it to a minimum. Thanks though.
glitchthe3rd September 20, 2012 Author September 20, 2012 Rap is just bad poetry. Just saiyan. "Science isn't about why, science is about why not?" -Cave Johnson Tulpae: Luna, Elise, Naomi My progress report
intelhunter September 20, 2012 September 20, 2012 Be prepared for some below middle school-tier crap... Sit down and prepare to take your fix and all other things seem to lose meaning to this as if your ensnared against a clock counting down to your end while it ticks. In this world there is but one other who dons the familiarity of a brother but who looks to you like a child to her mother and her first words shake your world, a torrent of thunder. Cut her free from these binds those which are forged in our minds, waiting til you feel the first sign and following examples of the divine you spawn her to this earthen plane focusing all attention, shutting out the pain relentless until she looks the same and remember in the end... you're still sane. I am so sorry for creating this. Smooth man. 7/10. for realz, thats way above middle school shit. Ayo grill how you be?
Natasha September 20, 2012 September 20, 2012 "Why? It was nice!" admittedly, i imagined a stereotypical rapper singing it. I was actually enjoying it, and halfway through i scroll down and see this. All poetry is now forever ruined. De bedste og smukkeste ting i verden kan hverken ses eller røres, de må opleves med hjertet.
Kadoh September 21, 2012 September 21, 2012 The War Pt 2 http://pastebin.com/8GQpptHa I approve, you get an A+ Why did you kill off Aria? My opinions are all subject to change.
Guest Anonymous September 21, 2012 September 21, 2012 She's revived. And its dramatic. Dani is extremely mad now, and yes my real name is Dani, and she uses her *Mary sue* powers to revive Aria. THE FIGHT SHALL GO ON!
Kadoh September 21, 2012 September 21, 2012 She's revived. Dat spoiler. Also, I like the inclusion of Shin :P it's strange how Lucifer never gets mentioned in stories, espescially how he practically rivals Shin in every way, if not surpasses him, when he goes all Pyramid Head. If you dot know what Pyramid Head is, http://silenthill.wikia.com/wiki/Pyramid_Head scroll down for pics. Anyway, I am enjoying your story, good work. My opinions are all subject to change.
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