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im looking at it and its like TL;DR all over my face. I need to find time to read this it sounds amazing after just the prologue.

fourfiction, the idiot.

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IT WILL NEVER BE FINISHED.

 

Because I realized I don't know where to go with the story. Oh well.

What do you mean you don't know where to go? As long as it isn't going nowhere, I'd say that's pretty good. Take your time, you'll get the motivation to write when it comes.

 

1000/10, greatest piece of

non

fiction I've ever read.

My Tulpa

And then it cuts to a scene where you're sitting in a padded cell.

 

If I had a microphone better than my mp3 player's, I would totally do a dramatic reading of this entire thing.

"If this can be avoided, it should. If it can't, then it would be better if it could be. If it happened and you're thinking back to it, try and think back further. Try not to avoid it with your mind. If any of this is possible, it may be helpful. If not, it won't be."

 

Wow this is very, meticulous.

Name: Luna (Used to be "Dashie")

Birthday: Jan 29, 2013

Form: Rainbow Dash

Stage: Imposition/Visualization/Voice

Hah, I see what you did there, putting a comma before the word "meticulous" to make your sentence sound more stilted.

Hah, I see what you did there, putting a comma before the word "meticulous" to make your sentence sound more stilted.

 

I didn't see it.

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So, i learned the hard way not to drink coffee while reading this...

Still worth it!

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